Dan Harmon is the writer and creator
behind three of my favorite shows: Community, Rick and Morty, and the one I
want to talk about today because it demonstrates how storytelling is, like
any other skill, something you can practice until it becomes an instinct.
Let’s talk about “HarmonQuest”
So here’s the premise for the show:
Dan Harmon gets together with some comedians to play an off-brand version
of Dungeons & Dragons. They improvise their way through a familiar fantasy
story of monster-slaying and magical object-hunting, the broad strokes of
which are invented by Spencer Crittenden, the dungeon master.
Spencer: So which one? You got
non-lethal arrows, good-aligned arrows, sleep arrows.
Sudekis: You have this all memorized?
Spencer: I’m a DUNGEON MASTER!
The live recording is edited down into digestible 20-minute chunks, and then animators bring their
adventure to life. The result is really funny, but it’s not just funny. It’s solid
storytelling too. Because with Harmon, it’s almost as if he can’t resist. He
can’t resist elevating the story. Here’s what I mean. So in episode 2, the gang is fighting a demonic version of Chelsea Peretti, when
Spencer: something about the ghost smoky form staves off your blows.
Fondue: I run I run.
Boneweevil: What fondue?
Fondue: it’s a character development thing.
This line gets a laugh
but it also reveals the difference between what Harmon is doing and what
his co-hosts are doing. Now don’t get me wrong,
Erin MacGathy and Jeff B Davis are hilarious on this show. But I think the
gear that is turning in their minds as they play is: “how do I make this funnier?”
while the gear that’s turning in Harmon’s head is: “how do I make this more
compelling?” In reality, all three of them are probably thinking both thoughts, so
it’s really more a difference of degrees. But those degrees make a difference,
because as a result, the arc of the story bends towards Harmon’s character, and I
end up knowing way more about Fondue Zubag than I do Baer O’Shift, or
Boneweevil. Yeah the show loves characters with ridiculous names.
Spencer: what’s your character’s name Mr. Peanut Butter: Teflonto! PC: I am hon jodgeman.
Aubrey Plaza: My name is… Hawaiian Coffee.
By calling attention to his own character
development, Harmon turns scenes that would otherwise be just about hacking monsters to death, into scenes about overcoming cowardice. And I think that’s important
because doing that is contradictory to what the appeal of a role-playing game
is. Dungeons & Dragons and other games like it are ultimately power fantasies.
You enter the game, overcome obstacles and get stronger along the way. If that’s
all that happens it can be an incredibly fun and rewarding experience for the
player, but that doesn’t necessarily mean it’ll be fun for the audience.
Harmon’s decisions on the other hand, deliberately make his character weaker.
He has an internal flaw to fight against and that gives the story much more
dramatic meat to work with later on. In “The Anatomy Of Story,” John Truby lays
out 22 steps that he argues most stories take, and one of the most important steps
he calls “weakness and need.” A story is really about a character overcoming
their weakness, and discovering what they really need. In the case of fondue, he
overcomes cowardice and realizes that what he needed all along was friendship.
The way the show resolves all of this is a little bit forced.
Flower-den: True heroes are
courageous. Knock that shit off.
Fondue: Then I’ll be brave from now on.
But the point here isn’t that each element is executed perfectly, but that the elements of a
good story are all here, even though this is an improvised story. This is also
something that Spencer Crittenden recognized when putting the show
together: “Usually when you’re designing a campaign or adventure, you don’t plan
what they’re going to do, or what kind of arcs are going to go o,n because that’s
the stuff that players bring to the table, but because this is going to be
consumed as a TV show, we figured that we wanted to spend a little bit more time
making sure that the story had arcs. And that’s what led me to the idea that
Dan’s character, didn’t have a father.” Boneweevil: Fondue, your father left you and you were young right?
Fondue: I, yeah, but I like to be the one to share that.
The show is able to get a lot of mileage out of that relatively simple wrinkle in
the story and if you’re following along with John Truby’s book you call this
step the ghost, “it’s an open wound that is often the source of the hero’s
psychological and moral weakness.” Now, it’s entirely possible that Spencer was
also behind the idea to make Harmon’s character a coward, but there are a bunch
of other examples of Harmon making deliberate choices to refocus the story on
dramatic internal conflict throughout the show.
Fondue: I’m not gonna, I’m not gonna, I’m
not gonna be one of those cowards that lies about being a coward. I’m gonna be
brave and tell you I’m a coward.
Fondue: I don’t want to be here.
PC: It’s just market demand.
Fondue: Well here’s my market demand. Some personal space and I storm off. The other the other guys they
think I’m useless you know because I react naturally to things. I have
And Erin and Jeff do this too when they become frustrated by Fondue’s
I just know that I have more than pulled my weight. Again it’s
difficult to say with certainty what was part of the pre-planning and what was
improvised, but if you look at Harmon’s Podcast, Harmontown, there is even more
evidence of him doing this. On the podcast, Harmon and Jeff regularly play
Dungeons and Dragons, and pretty early on Harmon is leaning towards drama conflict
and planting the seeds for character growth.
Harmon: Let’s set up camp and just get to
know each other. Let’s make a little fire and let’s just talk about our backstory.
Alright my father, actually in a point of fact, was a barbarian like you. Sometimes
I wish I could — I could — I could launch into a rage like you and just like like
make everything okay.
I think there’s two lessons for writers to take away from
all this. First that what is entertaining for a creator, might not necessarily be
entertaining for an audience, and that you want to mine deeply into your
character’s weaknesses and fears to create compelling internal and external
conflict, instead of creating characters where we’re just indulging in their
awesomeness. Even the James Bond franchise figured this out with the
Daniel Craig movies. And two, that eventually storytelling will come
naturally. Dan Harmon has written hundreds of TV episodes so he’s at the
point where he can’t not hit the beats he knows have to be there on instinct. I
think it’s pretty common for writers or for anyone trying to do anything
creative to feel overwhelmed by how much
information there is to absorb about their craft. If you try to keep all of it
in mind at once you’d never write a word, but if you continue to study, continue to
practice, it will eventually recede into your subconscious and make the telling
as natural as breathing. In Dan Harmon’s own words: You know all of this
instinctively. You are a storyteller. You were born that way.
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trial. Also, this video referenced Harmontown, the documentary about Dan’s podcast tour, so if you’re interested in Dan I’d also recommend checking that out for a really revealing behind-the-scenes look. As always, keep writing and I’ll see
you soon with a new video.