What Writers Should Learn From Aquaman


There are several moments during Aquaman where I thought to myself, “Did Michael Scott write this movie?” “Detective Michael Scott, I’m with the FBI!” A curiously large number of scenes in Aquaman are interrupted by a sudden outburst of action. Soldiers burst into the Curry family home to arrest Queen Atlanta. Soldiers burst into the shipwreck to arrest Aquaman. An explosion interrupts King Orm mid-sentence. An explosion interrupts Aquaman and Mera mid-flirtation. “Think about this… what is the most exciting thing that can happen on TV or in movies or in real life? Somebody has a gun. That’s why I always start with a gun because you can’t top it, you just can’t.” “I’ve been on to you and your little friends for weeks. Boom! Boom!” “Boom!”
“I’m not even in this scene!” “Boom! Boom! Boom! Boom!” Taken on its own, this proclivity for suddenly throwing the viewer into an action scene isn’t that big a deal. But in trying to figure out why this movie is written the way it is, a lot of the other problems in the story came to light. This isn’t a movie that is terrible by any stretch but it is one whose shortcomings I find useful. So let’s um… dive in, I guess. Really? A pun? Man, who wrote my script? Mr. Freeze? Aquaman was directed by James Wan, known for a long career in horror films having directed Saw, Iinsidious, The Conjuring as well as one action film, the seventh Fast and the Furious movie. And Aquaman is very much a James Wan movie even though the films have different cinematographers, there are a ton of notable shots in Aquaman that were also used in Furious 7. You’ve got these flowing surreal transitions early in the movie linking together settings that are not physically connected. In Furious 7, the camera tilts up away from a hospital in London and then we’re on a desert road. In Aquaman we dive underwater and then arrive inside an aquarium. Then it’s back through the aquarium and here’s a submarine. He also reuses this shot where we track the movement of a character getting body-slammed. A montage in Furious 7 has the camera circling around characters in different scenes intercutting it into one smooth motion and in Aquaman, the same technique is used for a flashback. And when something is the most cool a thing can possibly be in a James Wan movie, then there’s only one way to film it – slow motion with a guitar riff. So, James Wan’s style is all over this movie and his style, at least in his action movie so far, is not subtle. It demands engagement! And with his long background in horror movies, I think it’s worthwhile to think of the way these action beats start as jump scares. But jump scares work best when they happen within a suspense scene. If you just throw them anywhere they’re a bit cheap and it suggests the filmmakers are a little worried the audience is falling asleep. It’s a way to temporarily jerk the audience into attentiveness and I look at how these actions scenes start the same way. Which means what we really have to talk about is exposition and pacing. “My, my, my, such a lot of guns around and so few brains.” One of the greatest writers of hard-boiled detective fiction, Raymond Chandler, once said “When in doubt have a man come through a door with a gun in his hand.” Now, while that quote certainly sounds like a piece of advice, Chandler actually said this in the 50s, reflecting on his career as a writer for pulp magazines in the 20s and 30s, where he had to write on a deadline and the emphasis was on constant action. Having a man with a gun enter a scene without any previous setup was a cheap trick that he could get away with for that specific audience whenever he was short on time or didn’t know how to develop the story organically. Superhero stories also originated in the pulps and the audiences of modern blockbusters are just as thirsty for action scenes as the readers of 1920s pulp fiction. And as a giant tentpole superhero action movie, Aquaman is practically obligated to deliver an action set every 20 minutes, the problem is that there is a lot of exposition in this movie. Like a lot a lot! We have to learn about the rise and fall of Atlantean civilization, the forging and loss of the trident, the deathmatch, the giant squid monster, the politics of the Seven Kingdoms and what happened to Arthur’s mother. Now normally in an action movie you only want to dole out as much exposition as the audience needs to understand the next action scene. Recently, the editor of Mission Impossible Fallout shared this graphic which charts every movie in the franchise minute by minute, sorting each into three types of scene: talking scenes, suspense scenes, and action scenes. In an interview he said that in these movies, the characters talk about what’s supposed to happen, setting up the rules of the upcoming sequence. Then you watch that scene play out as suspense, usually with minimal dialogue, then things don’t quite go to plan. And that culminates in a large action set piece. In fairness, this is exactly how Juan’s Furious 7 is written. The benefit of doing it this way is that it gives the characters more agency in the story. They are choosing to fight and coming up with their own plans, rather than having fights thrown at them. If we made one of these charts for Aquaman we’d only have talking scenes and action scenes. Now, that’s fine in and of itself, Aquaman isn’t a spy thriller and doesn’t have to play by the same conventions as the Mission Impossible movies. But what I’m getting at is that the scenes of exposition are not utilized as a way to set up the action scenes, they’re used as ways to world build for stuff that’s important much later in the movie and when those scenes get boring, action scenes are used to resuscitate the pacing of the movie. Like the scene where Aquaman gets captured didn’t need to be a whole action scene, it could have just been one shot where a guy knocks him unconscious. But we just had to listen to five minutes of Atlantean history, so the audience needs a break. Send in the soldiers. So really, the question is why does this movie about two guys fighting with giant forks needs so much exposition and it’s because Aquaman is actually two movies sewn into one. The protagonist and the antagonist of this film have completely different goals in the story and are rarely in the same scene together. Now yes, they’re both trying to be king, but they’re doing it in completely different ways that are not in competition with one another. Aquaman is trying to find a magic trident, Orm is trying to unite allies to his cause. And on top of that there is a secondary antagonist in Black Manta, who has a different goal, as well, Killing Aquaman. This structure doubles or triples the amount of exposition the film requires then if they had all had the same goal. I mean let’s consider two alternative versions of this movie. In one, Orm is also trying to find the trident or maybe Black Manta is trying to find it on Orm’s behalf, or he’s trying to get it for himself because he thinks it’s the only way to kill Aquaman. In any case, everyone wants the trident. Then Aquaman could battle with him throughout the story in a sort of Indiana Jones-style hunt for a MacGuffin. They could fight team up hold each other hostage all that good stuff The movie wouldn’t feel quite as episodic as it does now and would make Black Manta threat for more than a single scene down the stretch. Also, the final fight could end with Arthur claiming the Trident rather than having the fight start after he’s already done so. To me that’s a helpful change because despite the bajillion lasers on-screen, the final battle has a very little tension since the Trident has been built up to be all-powerful. Or in our other alternative version of the movie, we could have Aquaman approaching the heads of the other kingdoms trying to persuade them to join him. Of the two, this is to me more interesting because somewhere in the back of my brain I remembered that I once saw this character fall through an entire building. So I’m never that worried about him losing a physical fight, but sign me up for the movie where this surfer dude has to learn diplomacy. Give him a fight that he can’t punch his way out of, sort of like Ned Stark circa season 1 of Game of Thrones. So, in short the disparate plot goals necessitate a ton of exposition for what could have been a relatively simple story and because of that exposition, superfluous and sudden action scenes are inserted to rescue the pacing of the film. As a result, Aquaman doesn’t really have that much agency in his own story and is instead either having something explained to him or punching whoever got the jump on him. Spectacle can make up for a lot. Don’t get me wrong, I too am a sucker for the eye-popping colors, the grand landscapes, the drum playing octopus and the giant squid voiced by Mary Poppins. And it’s all filmed with clarity and gusto. But no amount of spectacle can save a story that has flaws at its foundation. Wait, do those sharks really have freaking laser beams attached to their heads? “You know, I have one simple request and that is to have sharks with frickin laser beams attached to their heads! Okay, never mind all is forgiven. Alright, so despite my criticisms, Aquaman was still a pretty funny movie and I find writing comedy to be maybe the most difficult part of any kind of writing. Which is why sometimes my videos don’t even have jokes! But that’s why I was happy to discover Mike Lacher’s course on Skillshare called Humor Writing: Write Funny for the Internet, which you’ll find useful if you’re writing for the internet, it’s there in the title So this episode was sponsored by Skillshare. Which if you don’t know is an online learning community with over 20,000 classes to choose from, many of which are about writing. If you want to give it a shot, the first 500 people to use the link in the description of this video will get a 2 month free trial. 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